Wednesday, February 16, 2011
Free Write-My mother always...
My mother always...drives like a crazy person. She drives way to fast and dangerously in a lifted tahoe. She also always does her make-up while driving, she sounds ridiculously crazy but I love her, she's amazing. She always has the best advice when ever I need it, which is a lot. She always makes pancakes on sunday and they are soo good,and makes the best quacamole ever! She always loves my brothers and I no matter what we do. She always says her name is Jay instead of Jeannine at Starbucks because they always get it wrong. She's so awesome, I love her.
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Hands down, the best free write with a required topic, ever. Great job. I love the fact that you talk about her crazy driving, then the next sentence you defend her and reassure your audience that she's not crazy, it's just her driving. I also really like the fact that more towards the second half of the paragraph through to the end, you start listing things such as the pancakes and guacamole, and her everlasting love for you and your siblings. The way you list off things you admire her for truly shows that there is so much good you can say about her, but given that 3 minute time restraint, it was difficult. Again, great job.
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